Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Erin Collett

Erin Collett: 

16 comments:

  1. Morgan Buck
    I like the way you used the rule of thirds and put the kids and Santa to the side and the tree to the other side. I would have done something to cover the light coming from the window.

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  2. Hannah Scott: Very pretty. It shows joy and your making kids happy by volunteering(:

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  3. Autumn Seipelt:I like all the kids with santa but the lighting is not very good:{).

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  4. Morgan Sroufe- I like that you used people in the picture. You could have gotten a closer up so the stuff in the background to the left isn't there.

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  5. Good: i like how everyone is happy in this picture.
    Bad: could use better lighting on some of the faces
    Chase Edward Lawson

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  6. It is differnt to see people in the photo, but it is very good. You probably could've fixed the lighting on the people's faces.
    - Brett Lowell Fisher

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  7. Alyssa Atkins
    I like the picture of everyone smiling and being cheerful but you could have gotten it less blurry on some of the faces on the picture

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  8. Hannah Dotson
    I like that you had people in your pictures but you should have zoomed in on them and got the clutter out of the background.

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  9. josh mason
    nice family picture but you cant see some of the kids faces

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  10. Ethan nice way of focusing on the people
    the sun is to bright

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  11. Nicole Powers:
    i like how you used an interesting level on the people and had the tree off to the side but i think you should have tried to get better lighting.

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  12. Emily Williams
    I like how you had people in your picture but you had them in bad lighting

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  13. Good picture on capturing how excited the kids are, maybe could have tried getting different lighting so there wasn't a glare on most of the people. -Kelsey

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  14. Shelby:
    I like how all the kids are placed in levels that work with eachother but you could have used more lighting and rule of thirds better.

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  15. Rebekah Colliver:

    I like how you got the kids and the tree in the picture at once and how it showed the holiday spirite, but one thing that you probably could have done to improve the picture would be to zoom in more onto the kids/tree, so there weren't as many distractions in the backgroud.

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  16. Rebecca: i like how you showed the kids with santa and the tree, its a happy picture. something you could have done better is cover up the light from the window.

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